John
Knowles begins A Separate Piece with
present day Gene visiting Devon and reflecting on what differences he’s
noticed. He observes that the school now looks more rigid and less lively, and
to Gene, it looks “…as though a coat of varnish had been put over everything
for better preservation” (Knowles 1). The air is heavy with fog, and the
picture that Gene paints of Devon is bleak and colorless. The first part of Chapter
1 sets a mood of nostalgia and solemnity, but in a stark contrast, later in the
chapter, young Gene describes Devon as vibrant, warm, comforting, and bursting
with life and excitement. Landmarks that embody Gene’s time at Devon have been
restored and made magical again as Gene flashes back in time. When Gene visits
his school as an adult, he sees that the places he once loved, such as the tree
that had been to him “one of the giants of your childhood” (Knowles 14), now
look completely unremarkable to him. Places he used to love have lost their
that childhood magic, and he can barely tell places that once defined him apart
from others. As Gene's age shifts, we even see a transformation in color and weather
from Gene’s heavy, dark business shoes dragging in the mud to Finny’s bright
white sneakers gliding over the dirt, as well as the overcast, foggy November
day turning to a refreshing summer afternoon. After feeling that dark, gray mood
for the first half of the chapter, and then being thrown back into a time when
there was sunshine and adventure at Devon, it seems as if Knowles is trying to
hint that something drastically changed the way Devon sees his former school,
and possibly, the world around him.
We watch as Gene travels around Devon, constantly being thrown into his
past. He has forced himself to revisit the days he attended Devon, and he realizes
all that time has changed. The memory of his school has been preserved in his
mind, and he can’t seem to forget all that happened there, making the readers
understand how important the events that took place there were to Gene’s growth.
He had gotten to know a location a certain way so well in one time, and now it
looks different to him in another. This illustrates how time has shaped a place he once new well until that same place is nearly unrecognizable. In reality, it really is his individual
perspectives that have changed. The happiness and simplicity of being a child has disappeared and been replaced with the heaviness and complexity of being an adult. Knowles very deliberately helped readers feel
the difference between the two time periods to create the same effect that this
experience has on Gene– who hasn’t visited his school, or his childhood, in 15 years. Gene’s
observations indicate that this once happy place has turned into a ghost of a
memory of happiness. His school, representing his time as a carefree
adventurous boy, has turned into a glossy museum, a memorial for his lost
childhood innocence. Gene tells us, “Everything at Devon slowly changed and
slowly harmonized with what had gone before. So it is logical to hope that… I
could achieve, perhaps unknowingly already had achieved, this growth and
harmony myself,” (Knowles 12). This makes the reader realize that Gene has
evolved since the adventurous moments before high school, and it makes us wonder what could have happened during high school, as
well as throughout his early adulthood, to change how he views the world around him. Gene, as well as the readers, see that his life experiences after he graduated have accumulated and buried
the boy he once knew himself to be. By showing such contrasting images of the
same place, one in the summer before high school and one 15 years later,
Knowles sets the stage for the explanation and story of all that happened in
between.
I do agree with Rachel in that John Knowles chose to have Gene open the book by narrating the present tense and then to transition into to a high school flashback fifteen years before to show to the reader that things significantly changed since his early high school days. Not only was Devon then without its now present "glossy new surface" (Knowles 9), but it was also in the midst of a war that caused Gene to feel a sense of fear that "had surrounded and filled [his] days" (Knowles 10). The war, I think, was the main thing that changed Gene. In his reminiscence, the first thing Gene remembers is this constant fear, which is not a typical connotation of high school. Since the war caused Gene such fear, it suggests to the reader that now that the war has ended, Gene has a newfound sense of comfort which he didn't feel throughout his years at Devon. With the times become less violent, Gene has grown and changed from his high school self.
ReplyDeleteIt seems odd that Knowles associated Gene's fear with a sense of "uncontrollable joy" (Knowles 10). Why and how do you think that these two antithetical feelings somehow have a relationship to each other?
I am going to agree with Rachel in saying that this is basically showing how an adult's perspective on a childhood memory is completely different from how they had seen it as a child. Gene, as an adult, seems to have seen the school in a new, more pessimistic, light. "In this double demotion the old giants have become pygmies while you were looking the other way" (Knowles, 14). It was as if, when visiting this school as an adult, he realizes that his ability to see the beauty of normal things had just disappeared, so he simply saw them as boring old trees. It was like he had lost the ability to imagine, or he had simply grown out of the age for it.
ReplyDeleteAdding to what Delila said, but somewhat disagreeing, I do not think that the war is the main thing that has changed Gene from how he was as a child to how he is now. The line "Nothing endures, not a tree, not love, not even death by violence," gets the message across that change is inevitable, and at the same time, the specifics of this sentence make it seem as if Gene has experienced them on a personal level (14). I believe later in the book we will get a closer look on how Gene experienced this different things and how they helped shape him as an adult. To make a more precise prediction, I'm also thinking that perhaps Phineas is the one who died by violence. Maybe this is the reason that Gene is revisiting his school after so long, and it could be why the school seems so shrouded in sad nostalgia.
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